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DESCRIPTION OF A PERSON
I would like to talk about my best friend Lenka. I am so lucky to have her.
Without her I would not be as happy as I am now. I have known her for my whole life. We are neighbors so I see her often.
Lenka is small and quite slim. She has got an oval face with bright blue eyes and a big mouth. She has long brown wavy hair but she usually wears it in a ponytail. She is quite beautiful, especially when she smiles.
She always seems to be in a good mood. We have nearly the same hobbies and sometimes the same opinions. She always brings out the best in me by being positive and cheerful.
She is like a part of my family. I trust her as much as I trust my close family member. I find her very honest; she always says what she thinks. It can be useful sometimes .For example when we go shopping she tells me frankly what fits me and what not.
We are really close to each other; she can tell if I'm lying even if I am keeping a straight face! I don't know how she does it!
I don't know how it is possible but I am never bored with her.
Sometimes she tends to be stubborn, she never admits her fault. But she is stubborn only with her parents, but we have never argued.
I hope our friendship will be long and won't ever end.
she always says what she thinks. . - why "sometimes"?:-) it is a positive trait. I wish all people around me had this feature of character.
Sometimes she tends to be stubborn; she never admits her fault. But she is stubborn only with her parents, but we have never argued. - this phrase seems unsuitable to its place. it looks segregated.
I liked your essay, very sincere writing.
She has an oval face with bright blue eyes and a smiling mouth.---In English, saying someone has a big mouth means they talk too much! :-)
She has long, brown, wavy hair, but she usually wears it in a ponytail. She is quite beautiful, especially when she smiles.
She always seems to be ...
.. what fits me and what does not.
We are really close to each other; she can tell if I'm lying even if I am keeping a straight face! I don't know how she does it! These sentences are very well-writen.
I don't know how it is possible, but I am never bored with her.
Sometimes she tends to be stubborn; she never admits her faults. She is stubborn only with her parents, though. She and I have never argued.
Nice job!! I like it.
*My Best Friend Personality*
Some people say that friends are the family we choose for ourselves, and that a true friend is a treasure very hard to find. I could say that my best friend is one of those. He possesses all the qualities of head and heart.
Joel is my best friend. He is 17 years old and he has a personality and manners that never fail to make a good impression on others. He is outgoing, friendly, and open-minded. In social events he never feels shy, actually being surrounded by people is one of his favorite things.
He is also calm and relaxed , he doesn’t get worked up or stressed very much at all. For example if he has a problem or a difficult situation he always stays calm and takes it easy. Besides, he is curious and inquisitive, and has a lot of interests, in some many different areas of life. He would like to become a neurosurgeon someday and he believes life is a great big adventure with so much to discover and many opportunities.
On the other hand he is caring, he has suffered a lot in his life but now he is happy, he has developed a great compassion for other people and he is always willing to help people out whenever he can. I guess these are all his best qualities but I should tell some negative also, but apart from being annoying and crazy sometimes he is the best person I’ve ever met.
I am proud of my best friend. And of course I have learnt a lot of useful things from him. He have taught me that everything that happens, happens for a reason and we have to e originals and try to be myself all the time.